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I've never entered a DA contest, but -

here's my Tomb Raider #Reborn entry! (Which you can reblog on Tumblr, if you want! [link])

I loved this game so much, like wow, I need to play through it again! :3 Fun stuff!

(And Madam Croft is my forever!girl, of course. :'P)
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:iconkatetheterrorist:
Btw I follow you on tumblr.

Theres a little bit of ambiguity going on in the left and right side of the (girl not the shadow) I don't think that is intentional. I cant really tell if they are rocks or hay (on right).

The shadow clearly does not reflect what the girl is actually doing, so maybe (if shadow is the focal point)the shadow should be more prominent in the work, it kind of just fades into the background with the similar colors to the background. I had a hard time figuring out the extension of the picture was about.

There also needs to be a focal point, the picture drifts the point from the shadow to the girl. The rocks and trees and stuff due to their angle make the focal point the top of the girls head which looks kind of odd.

The picture could have had more impact of the red from the fire reflected more on her clothes, the girl seems to sink back instead of come forward because of the blue from her clothes.

I have a problem of the diluted shadow by the mountain rocks, instead of it being one thick shadow, its just light and dark parts of a whole.

Also her left arm (from viewer) looks off. There is some perspective issues.

Overall, I think its a pretty good presentation, I only wished that the girl was the focus instead of the shadow, because she (clearly) is more interesting to look at. (She (in my opinion) should be a little bit bigger)

Good job and keep up the good work.
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Beltaneh Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
I really like your concept :D
I'm not very good at drawing myself, but guess KateThetterrorist's critique can be useful for (personal) improvement. I like the attention being drawn to the shadow, though.
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lucia-anhidra Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
I thought it was Katniss haha. this is very nice, I like the fire!!
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aaawhyme Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
it's awesome!
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blossombritt Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wow! This looks incredible!! I've never really heard of the game before, but this makes me very interested!
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Destiny-Smasher Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! This came out wonderfully. Makes me excited to play the game myself.
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ninja1589 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wooow this is really great! I absolutely love everything about it!
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TamsTheGenkiQueen Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It's a really neat concept and adds a lot more to the character than I've seen in other entries. I really think this deserves a win. :)
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StarJosherson Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013   General Artist
Epicness in its wake! :D
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Nathaniolmh Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
It's good! I hope you win C:
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cheernerd7 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it!
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